When I first looked at The UOS Times, I was surprised. I didn’t know our school could make such a sophisticated and detailed magazine.The pages were filled with many interesting pictures and articles. Much good information was hidden inside the magazine. As I flipped through pages, I became to be more and more drawn into the magazine.
But mostly, the magazine was hard for someone like me who is not used to reading English magazines. It took me a long time to figure out meanings of some articles, and most of the time I only looked at pictures. I felt that the magazine needed to be written more easily. Many famous magazines, such as Newsweek or Time, have articles with good pictures.
I like the UOS magazine for having a lot of good pictures. Since there will be many people who can’t read the magazine in detail, I hope the magazine emphasizes putting more excellent pictures in it. It might make the magazine more interesting and have more readers in school.
There is a saying; a thousand hearings are not as good as one seeing. It would be better to use many visual images to decorate the magazine. I’m sure it can draw many people’s attention!